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Hook or a sinker?
Asked by John Heskett on January 16, 2021
Hello Jerry,
I've beaten this hook to death, or hopefully into life.
I'd appreciate any input, review, or suggestions you might have.
A victim of a prison-shank execution joins benevolent spirit beings in a battle for the aegis of humanity, exploiting time-travel to give the dead second chances.
Thank you for all you do.
Jerry's Answer
It's big concept, John, which is, of course, a plus.
I'm not sure, however, whether you're using aegis correctly, unless it has a meaning other than "the support of a particular group." What do you mean here, and might there be a better label for it?