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Sentence Structure
Asked by Susan Carter on July 8, 2020
After submitting my writing through a critique grid, I found my major fault to be starting sentences with pronouns. Do you have any suggestions for books or links to which I can refer to help me correct this problem?
Jerry's Answer
Here's some good counsel on that, Susan: http://www.novelpublicity.com/2012/04/how-can-i-cut-back-on-the-abundance-of-pronouns-in-my-writing/